Monday, February 10, 2020
The things i did in the holidays
This is my slide on what my top 5 best things i did in the holidays i have many more i just couldent choose of ones to do. What did you do in the holidays? tell me in the comments below ( I did change the slide )
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Hi Molly, it sounds like you had a great holiday. Your post reminded me about my holidays. Maybe next time you could add a picture or describe about what you did at that time, but i did really enjoy reading about what you did in the holidays.
ReplyDeleteHi Molly, I think it was really good but next time you could add some pictures and check your spelling. What was your favrite?
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my blog and thank you for checking my work that I spelt things right and I will probably edit my work now. Thank you
DeleteHi Molly Its Olivia, I really liked it but maybe next time you could add some colors and make it a bit more colorful
ReplyDeleteKia ora my name is Ava and im currently working in 4 privet drive. i read your slide about top 5 activity's i thought it was okay but how come you only write down a list and its plain white i thought your slide would be amazing. but it is just a plain list. next time put more thought into what you post and take your time dont rush and stay calm. sincerely Ava.
ReplyDeleteHey Molly! I loved your slide about your holidays! Thank you for putting in went to Daisy's house -w- Maybe next time you could put in some pictures, or make each one it's own slide. Daisy xx
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