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Friday, April 24, 2020

Descriptive Writing in lockdown.




For writing we got to choose what we got to write a story about. And I just started a story that came straight from my head, To be honest I dont know why I made my story about this. I enjoy writing so I dont have a problem when it somes to writing storys. I wouldn't say this was easy but I also wouldn't say it was hard to. If you enjoyed this story please tell me in the comments below. 

2 comments:

  1. Another lovely story, well done Molly! Have a play with the formatting when you go to post your next blog as this one spreads right across the screen so makes it challenging to read.

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  2. Kia ora Molly
    I think it's awesome that you have great story ideas. A good tip would be to think of some different sentence starters apart from using 'I' all the time. Try words such as suddenly, next, where. Keep up the great enthusiasm for writing Molly!

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