Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 24, 2020
Descriptive Writing in lockdown.
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Another lovely story, well done Molly! Have a play with the formatting when you go to post your next blog as this one spreads right across the screen so makes it challenging to read.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Molly
ReplyDeleteI think it's awesome that you have great story ideas. A good tip would be to think of some different sentence starters apart from using 'I' all the time. Try words such as suddenly, next, where. Keep up the great enthusiasm for writing Molly!