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Friday, September 11, 2020

persuasive writing on why I should get a bunny

 Why I should get a bunny

I believe that I should be able to get a bunny because bunnies are very kind animals. They take lots of work which keeps you active and motivated. Bunnies are inside animals, the reasons why they belong inside are because they are prey animals so any animal can really eat them, which wouldn’t be good to keep them outside if you have a dog or a different animal that could easily eat it. 


First of all you wouldn’t have to care for the animal because that would be my full responsibility. Bunnies take full care which will keep me active and I won't become lazy. It will also keep me entertained and busy, it will give me something to do throughout the day which will get me off my devices. 


It will give me responsibility, and if I learn responsibility at a young age it will prepare me for the future. There are plenty of things that it will prepare me for because responsibility is a very important thing to learn at a young age. And if we had an animal in our house and I had to look after it, it would teach many things about animals. So if I get a child or an animal when I'm older I will be completely prepared for the experience. 


The last point is going to be about its breed. Most bunnies are completely safe and do not affect younger children. Bunnies are small prey animals, they are very caring and need full attention. They are very curious animals which they will happily just roam around the house without bothering anyone. They are mainly meant to stay in their cage either inside or outside.


In conclusion I think that I should be able to get a bunny and care for it.



For writing we were working on persuasive writing. This writing peice was made a little bit ago because I didn't know what to post so I decided to post this. We had to choose an animal to write a peice of persuasive writing about, I chose to do a bunny because I thought those types of animals would be nice to care for. The imformation I got about how to care for a bunny surprised me oh how much work and attention bunnys need. Would you like to have a bunny? tell me in the comments below. Have a nice day and thanks for coming onto my blog :)


1 comment:

  1. Hi my name is Taj I go to Ahipara school I really liked your story and your punctuation and writing.

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